NM.net Summer Scortch Round 2:Max vs onealien

[onealien]

chek in n drop...

consider this ma chek in...

u kno the rules...word up

[Vinnie P]

checka check check

[Vinnie P]

All right mate, i did what i could, im sure it aint enough do

Onealien is giggling and tickling he is amused with it*
The only grown ass dude in the circus, but he cool with it
He is delighted as the little girl blow on his balloon and he jerk off on krusty
Sniper4hire? In the darkest night he cant even kill frosty
He is suppose to be an alien but in disguise he is a predator**
Does that mean your like a transsexual gay traitor***
He changes his name to fade2black to lure the little kid****
As oneal’s liquid spits the little kid dip*****
He is an itch, right between ur crack ass he pinch
Slash felching, then he spits in the victim mouth, its melting
U got exposed, DNA on the handle, blood on the knob door
A plastic knife, a pellet gun and raped horse on the floor******
Sentenced for rape, ejected in the dessert with a blowing doll*******
Waiting for onealiens to pick him up and give him a new fail-latio role

*On another site under his name it says "amused by u"
**Avy/name
*** Suwu called him a transsexual
****fade2black was his name at first here
*****said something like that in another verse, i flipped it
******horse fucker, suwu said it in their battle
*******Dwells in the desert

[onealien]

a freestyle fo yur ass...read carefully...too many punches to * tag em all...


Aight, sit back n relax as I apply a lyrical ax to the fame of Max
Delusional I c u be, so round 2 I simply, wax this lame with facts
U r not Em, shyt ur not even his friend, as much as u intend
To glow with a bloody flow, yur still on a road with a dead end
a runaway u is, we all kno, cold and lonely against the onealien
I’ll leave u praying for mercy, curled in a corner yu’ll curse me
Around the corna a hearse be cuz deadly is wat ma verse be
From the start yur torn apart as I cast your remains here n there
So that yur listed location is unkown, basically body parts everywhere
U really r sad, not just yur mood, but the fling u thought u had
Wishing not on stars but on angels, who clowned u I might add
Why so serious, didn’t u kno? ol jester of the nightly msn show
When u battle me u fkin scrub, u lose with those satire fantasy lines
So maybe next time u can get suwu to write your entire fkin rhyme…

lolll

[Fatal-N-Felony]

i will vote for max cuz it was pretty funny and onealien seemed pretty basic nothing really intrested me in his rhyme

[T.B.G.]

yeah i go wid max.....i enjoyed his drop


and aliens verse was good but not too enjoyable

[Y.S.]

Vote: Onealiens


Max was more fictional punch's..and his flow was choppy

Onealien went personal if you can tell the sublimes..and his flow was consistent throughout

[Native Pride]

Reading Max's was funny, this shit made me laugh

He changes his name to fade2black to lure the little kid

but onea obviously has much better word flow and lyrical punches, so he gets ma vote.

[Bushi]

max's was funny but kinda generic altho a couple personals, alien kept at it and when u know the subli's u know he went real at it while max fantazised.

he completly submits his oponent when it comes to wordplay and flow, even tho max is gettin better, i felt he needed a lil more filler to make those lines stick.

so my vote onealien

[Chuck Dirty]

Vote: Oneal

Max - number one you started off unsure of yourself like u knew u were gonna lose.. not a good way to introduce yourself to a battle.. gotta show some bravado.
also i can see the relapse in ya rap lol way to much. and too much suwu, so u gave oneal a easy kill on the finisher

Oneal - flow was bananas...
"U r not Em, shyt ur not even his friend, as much as u intend
To glow with a bloody flow, yur still on a road with a dead end
a runaway u is, we all kno, cold and lonely against the onealien
I’ll leave u praying for mercy, curled in a corner yu’ll curse me
Around the corna a hearse be cuz deadly is wat ma verse be"
crazy flow pattern i liked it... lyrically more on par and the finisher was banannas 2

[Franco]

One gets my vote. There was too much I dunno, just not my type of boat,but Max did have a few funny jokes. One just spit some merciless fire.


Onealien gets my vote

[>War|Gamez<]

Even though max verse was decent , it just didnt have the punch lines or good lyrics. Average

My Vote goes to OneAlien , he rolled over Max in different ways.

[onealien]

its a wrap...6-2...

nice battle max...and tbo...yur drop had me rollin...

c ya next time homie....



word up....