Out of spare time

[Shiva]

When i was bored, i just banged out some pac tunes and started writin, i managed to do a verse, and this was my first time. wanna no what other members of the board think? Holla.

first verse

startin to produce my music, dats what im all about
people keep hatin hard, keep yappin der big mouth
im doin my solo ting cus now im on my grind
use to be a neek but now far from the kind
was inspired by the legend the king 2pac
he taught me the game and how to love rap
now uve heard my first verse go try top that.

[Bushi]

hello shiva welcome to battle rap. now take off that silly hat.
put yourself in that picture how could u do that?
try to rap but u still lack a clue... dont you?
standing with suge knight in blue throwin a W???
u wrote three bars and look plagued by fatigue..
hey motherfucker, welcome to the battle league.