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    She restled with sleep as it evades her,
    Deborah has been staring at the clock for hours
    as the hands of time ticked by ever so slowly.
    She cursed the nights when it creeps up on her
    for she fears the tormenting hours of her unrested soul.
    She looks at the clock once again and realizes
    Todd was not home yet from the late business meeting
    and the kids are asleep.

    Suddenly her ears alerted her of a faint noise
    arising from the floor below, she listened again
    and knew it was in the kitchen. Her heart rate increased
    palpitating furiously, slowly debbie gained her courage
    to arise and cautiously treads to the bedroom door,
    but she also remembered to take the gun that Todd
    had shown her how to use when he was never there to
    protect her.

    The bedroom door creaks open, the noise is muffled,
    she moves closer to the stairway anticipating the
    gory darkness and the murderous spirit roaming her house.
    Step by step she draws closer to the bottom of the stairway.

    As she reached the last stair, her heart racing, her hands
    starts sweating pathetically, making her to lose grip on the rail
    of the staircase almost losing balance.
    Debbie cursed the moment of insomnia
    because it could have prevented this madness of fear and despair.

    The noise gained up on her and before Debbie realized the
    ugliness of the night, her hands desperately pulled at the trigger.
    Something dropped to the floor in the still of the night.
    She raced to switch on the lights and when the darkness has fled
    the room, debbie looked in horror at what lay before her.

    insomnia kills.................

  • #2
    I read this before i think it was on ur myspace before u delete it

    a real nice piece of art... i love it

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    • #3
      Like it alot.. u know i doubted about the insomnia before i dict'ed it anyways
      u know the 1st 2 stanzas,making me feel that ur main aim so time,and fear combined and you're fearing to lose somethin or fearing something to come as time goes u get more trembeled...but in end i figured it was sleeping disorder and read it again and its more of a story,and its really nice

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