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    Never been good with titles, also its been a while since i dropped anything in this section and its been a while since i've wrote something. but anyways feedback are appreciated always.


    She doesn’t have the guts to spill ‘em out
    Just like I did when I cut myself open
    She must be battered now, from all the sublimes I’ve thrown, hoping
    For a better outcome than what I am actually holding
    I just want to crush it in my hand and quit
    Without even starting anything but I’m just a prick
    Who wants to be flattered but I’m just sick
    From all the love and pain and I need a new trick
    I have to stop walking under the rain but outside it’s so sane
    While inside the blood stream stopped I’m simply drained
    I’m simply plain coughing the smoke while my brain is stained
    Inflicting self damage just to maintain
    ‘Cuz I keep on stumbling on the everyday lane
    I keep on praying during the sleepless nights
    But then I feel betrayed ‘cuz the angels don’t show up to fight
    So I just mumble with the devil and take his daughter for a stroll
    And in return I get to burn everyone who caused wrong to my soul

  • #2
    good work here!

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    • #3
      thanks i suppose :/

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      • #4
        is this about love? or somene you love?

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        • #5
          Originally posted by eerik0 View Post
          is this about love? or somene you love?
          Yeah. It's about a person with who I go way back in a way. I wrote alot about her.

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          • #6
            then you should get title

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            • #7
              I'm feelin it... Thanks for sharin.

              By jamaal

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