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  • Lonely Dayz...

    Loneliness comes around in everybody's life at times. I often catch myself being the true reason for it. Just shuttin the doors to my heart down and faking that everything's alright and that I'll get over it. Yeah, sometimes u can get over it by yourself. But truth is, your few closed one's, whether they be friends or family members, are the only bond you can truly rely on.

    Dedicated to all the lonely souljas and ladies on here...


    Lonely Dayz


    Silently
    u guide your warm body
    thru the cold world

    with nobody
    callin u
    neither friends, nor girl

    u feel isolated
    from a world
    u perceive as cold

    a lonely soul
    seperated from the whole

    1/2 hearted
    u operate on your tasks
    most of them never finished
    only started

    u think your bad
    habits have gone away

    but they'll last
    until u've found a way
    2 quit procrastination

    there's no seperation
    between good & bad dayz
    they R all enriching

    eavesdrop the walls
    of your inner voice
    and just listen!..what?

    u blaim it 4 not pickin up?
    claimin there were 2 many unanswered calls
    it was either 2 busy or just blocked?
    thus, u R the one 2 be dissin, huh?

    don't cuss
    why frown?
    u must
    calm down..

    lay your body 2 sleep
    charge your memory
    and decrease
    your sorrow

    2morrow
    u'll wake up
    with a new belief
    no longer hollow

    lonely dayz will soon cease 2 exist
    complete the puzzle
    with the last peace in ur fist
    u'll let bright dayz follow




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    Last edited by Yaki Kadafi; 04-21-2010, 11:33 PM.

  • #2
    Damn, yall some cold souls. Nobody on here that ever felt lonely? lol

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    • #3
      Maybe nobody understand this.
      Maybe I'm too young, but I understand. I many saw and heard. Your poem is true and written from the heart. But was a lot poems and lyrics about loneliness. However, every poem is unique in its own way, because every person is unique. Write, I'm keeping my fingers crossed. My favorite verse:
      Eavesdrop The Walls
      of your inner voice
      And just listen! .. what?

      I'm in love with this.

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      • #4
        I can def relate to this..you did a great job! Everyone in some point of their life feels lonely.

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        • #5
          Can defo relate to this man...good shit

          Originally posted by Yaki Kadafi View Post
          1/2 hearted
          u operate on your tasks
          most of them never finished
          only started
          Thats me in a nutshell lol

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          • #6
            i am lonely, It is difficult to socialize with people, i get major anxiety. However it's not like i am anti-social....but the anxiety is killing me.

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            • #7
              i always feel that way, just sit there blasting pac and sometimes even cry to get the shit to feel better but hey this is life so what can one do?

              Thanks for the poem
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              • #8
                Originally posted by Big Worm View Post
                i always feel that way, just sit there blasting pac and sometimes even cry to get the shit to feel better but hey this is life so what can one do?

                Thanks for the poem

                I know the feeling!
                I think that nobody is lonley. For example, I don't feel lonley becasue music is alway next to me. When I'm sad I listen to music. When I'm happy I listen music, too. So, music is my the best friend.
                "Nobody is a lonley island." Our shadows are always with us. God is always. How we can be lonley when is a milion people around us? Somewhere far away or even near us, is somebody who only waits for our love. We have to open our eyes and hearts, then nobody will be lonley. I wish this for all of you.

                PS. Sorry for my bad English
                Last edited by korni; 12-12-2010, 04:54 PM.

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                • #9
                  A happy new year to all my poetic souljas on here first of all. I appreciate the love and the fact that you were willing to breathe the air of this poem.

                  Oh yeah, I will drop some new stuff soon

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                  • #10
                    Am feeling this one. Great piece.

                    By jamaal

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                    • #11
                      nice poem. u have talent. i'd like to see more soon

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                      • #12
                        yeah, we just got left hanging, smh.

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