2 My Enemiez (inspired by...guess who?)

[Yaki Kadafi]

This is an old poem I wrote back when I was 16..I remember I had to do it for a little school homework...but I didnt have the nutts to read it out, lol! Peep it...

2 My Enemiez

More than a little kid loves Dinsey Land
Or a woman loves a real man who's loyal and true
Or the fan loves his favorite band
That's how much I hate u

I hate u more than a gun can kill
And more than an atheist loves blasphemies
I hate u more than a wind in a hot summer day can chill
That's how much I hate 'em, my enemiez..

As a student loves good grades
Or a fat kid loves losin' weight
As a well-tended sistah loves fresh braids
That's how much u I hate

I hate u more than Tupac loved 2 rap
And more than a cigarette is nothin' but the taste of death
I hate u as much as 2day's radio plays crap
And more than a nap gives a bad breath

I hate u as much as alcohol increases the ego
And below if such there be
As robbing people is illegal
That's how much u R hated by me..


Thx for reading. Feel free to drop some feedback


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[Cesare Borgia]

I hate u more than a gun can kill
And more than an atheist loves blasphemies
I hate u more than a wind in a hot summer day can chill
That's how much I hate 'em, my enemiez..

That's fucking dope, i can see that as a killer hook

[insanity]

damn man u got some skills. keep posting more, this was very good.

[Yaki Kadafi]

I appreciate the love yall. Thx for the vibes. Never thought of the second passage being a hookline tho.. I'm gonna drop some new ish soon


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[korni]

Dear Yaki Kadafi, please, write more, I love your poems!

[Big Worm]

Nice!

[Q.q. Shakur]

This is an old poem I wrote back when I was 16..I remember I had to do it for a little school homework...but I didnt have the nutts to read it out, lol! Peep it...

2 My Enemiez

More than a little kid loves Dinsey Land
Or a woman loves a real man who's loyal and true
Or the fan loves his favorite band
That's how much I hate u

I hate u more than a gun can kill
And more than an atheist loves blasphemies
I hate u more than a wind in a hot summer day can chill
That's how much I hate 'em, my enemiez..

As a student loves good grades
Or a fat kid loves losin' weight
As a well-tended sistah loves fresh braids
That's how much u I hate

I hate u more than Tupac loved 2 rap
And more than a cigarette is nothin' but the taste of death
I hate u as much as 2day's radio plays crap
And more than a nap gives a bad breath

I hate u as much as alcohol increases the ego
And below if such there be
As robbing people is illegal
That's how much u R hated by me..


Thx for reading. Feel free to drop some feedback


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This is awesome man, post more of your stuff.

[baba]

yeah, its pretty badass! Your teacher woulda been scared shitless if u read this out loud, lol.

[Yaki Kadafi]

^^ lol. She would have definitely taken it all personally

Once again, thanks for the love yall