lyrics correction suggestion

[Omar]

hey chiefs...listen i was reading the how do u want it retail lyrics posted by J and i felt like one of the lines might b wrong...

in the 2nd verse, i feel instead of


want some on lease. i'm making millions.....

it shud/could be

once i'm released...i'm making millions.......

and in the 3rd verse

instead of "I'm with it quick I'se quick to whip that fuckin steel out"

it mite be

I'm with it quick that's with the whip (that fuckin steel out) or (n fuckin steel out)


i cud b wrong tho...pls check it out n let me know tho...

[BoNity]

i hear " Im with it quick, as quick to to whip the fuckin steel out"

[djukak]

[MENTION=7784]omarlaghari

http://www.2pac-forum.com/showthread.php/33536-Mistakes-in-lyrics

[baba]

I hear it as "I'm wit it quick, thats quick to whip the fuckin steele out"......pretty straightforward

[Omar]

I hear it as "I'm wit it quick, thats quick to whip the fuckin steele out"......pretty straightforward

yeah...i think u and BoNity got it right since both of u hear almost the same thing...and now that i look at it that way, it sounds right...cheers mates...

[Fatal-N-Felony]

[MENTION=7784]omarlaghari

http://www.2pac-forum.com/showthread...akes-in-lyrics

[MENTION=7784]omarlaghari
the thread duka mentioned is where you correct lyrics, not here