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    hurting and wondering
    i hope i live another day
    i just turned 30 2day
    its cold im not alone but im first to go
    i cant say no, but in my mind i scream every blink of my eye
    its hard 2 be happy if 2marrow may be my last day
    i c my family barely growing and they all knowing 2marrows the same
    i tell them i feel no pain but the word they dread brings them pain just the same
    i have just one friend only one till the end
    tell me why god has send for me
    my daughter calls me daddy when she smiles
    my son calls me daddy when i hug him
    my wife tells me she loves me when i cry
    its a new year everyone tries 2 pretend to be happy
    im cold mad and didnt ask to be bald
    im only 30 and its hard to smile when everyone else has hair
    its not fair but i gotta show im still here even when im not here
    all the ways i stare helps me remember when i was here
    i cant look at my families faces because they give the look like they wish they can trade places
    2 many tears no more fears only one left
    if fears can come true i hope it doesnt happen to u
    so many memories and time left in a day my son asked me if im gonna get up 2day
    my daughter said my head looks like a bowling ball
    i will never see them start school at all
    and for my wife i will never tell u the best year i had wit u in my life
    but know that everyday was always the best
    i fall asleep in tears alseep b4 her ignoring the pain
    another day and im gonna do it again
    another day 2 breaths i dont want 2 wake u
    for some reason i feel better now all i can say is i love u.
    Last edited by MR. ROJAS; 12-18-2011, 03:27 AM.
    Say no to Trump.

  • #2
    That was a fantastic poem! Great job.

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    • #3
      thanx its dedicated to my brother in law. RIP.
      Say no to Trump.

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      • #4
        beautiful poem!

        if picky on the spelling:
        tell me why god has send(sent) for me. Didn't notice an other then that. dunno if u care but I want it to be as perfect as it can

        marvelous poem!
        "Yo Krazy B". "You know what, When u said that last time, I was kind of trippin right, but now yo right, I am crazy, but you know waht else, I don't give a fuck" (Above the rim)
        "A coward dies a thousand deaths, A soldiers dies but once." (Tupac)
        "I am the punishment of god. If you had not comitted great sins, God would not have sent a punishment like me upon you." (Ghengis Khan)

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