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    Hey guys, this is a song I made. I'm rapping the 3 verses, but I got some help on the chorus from a friend. Hope you enjoy it.

    EDIT: NEW RECORDING ON A BETTER MIC:
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    old recording on youtube (shitty quality)
    Last edited by Esoteric; 03-05-2017, 09:09 PM.

  • #2
    i like it tbh seems like some real emotion there bro and some thoughts I can relate to
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    • #3
      Thanks for replying to my thread!!

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      • #4
        Like I said bro, you are a great writer. Keep at this.

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        • #5
          Great lyrics but I feel like you need to put a lil' more feeling into it my dude..

          Other than that it's dope..

          "If the world hates you, know that it has hated me before it hated you.
          If you were of the world, the world will love you as it's own; but because you are not of the world,
          but I chose you out of the world, therefore the world hates you."

          -John 15:18-19


          "I am he that liveth, and was dead; and, behold, I am alive for evermore, Amen; and have the keys of hell and of death."
          -Revelation 1:18

          "They claim that I'm violent."
          -Tupac Shakur


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          • #6
            Originally posted by Niner_M_O_B View Post
            I feel like you need to put a lil' more feeling into it my dude..
            that's what I thought too, but now I like it. fits very well to the lyrics and instrumental.

            [MENTION=1052]BigR well done
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            • #7
              I'm not sure where u are getting the feeling part of it from to me it fits perfectly its not a dynamic party rap It seems to me more of a painful/depressed type song correct me if I'm wrong [MENTION=1052]BigR
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              • #8
                Originally posted by Niner_M_O_B View Post
                Great lyrics but I feel like you need to put a lil' more feeling into it my dude..

                Other than that it's dope..
                Originally posted by Exodus View Post
                that's what I thought too, but now I like it. fits very well to the lyrics and instrumental.

                [MENTION=1052]BigR well done
                Originally posted by adoutlaw View Post
                I'm not sure where u are getting the feeling part of it from to me it fits perfectly its not a dynamic party rap It seems to me more of a painful/depressed type song correct me if I'm wrong [MENTION=1052]BigR
                Thanks for the feedback. Like it's been said, it's just the vibe for the lyrics, wouldn't sound right being hyped up at 130 bpm's for a song about suicide lol

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                • #9
                  great I knew my sad times and shit experiences would come in handy I got the vibe straight away
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                  • #10
                    Great lyrics, goes very well with the instrumental

                    I look forward to hearing more


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                      Got a new mic a while ago, re-recording this song. Here is an mp3 download if you choose to check it out:

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