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    TIDE
    Last edited by RoyalPurple; 09-16-2021, 09:43 AM.
    Love Peace & Harmony

  • #2
    i see you tryin to spit like pac
    Judge: Was it your intention to try and get young black people to be violent to police?
    2Pac: No.
    Judge: Were you trying to provoke anybody to do anything particular. Were you trying to provoke or try to get people to do things?
    2Pac: Yes.
    Judge: Tell us what.
    2Pac: Think.

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    • #3
      lol evry one mentions tryin to sound like pac.....good flow i loved it keep pushing u flowed grea
      Say no to Trump.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by TonyStress360 View Post
        i see you tryin to spit like pac
        i dont see any similarity to be honest but thats yo opinion.thanks.
        Love Peace & Harmony

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        • #5
          to be honest cliche

          you should look into the things you take time to write about it

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          • #6
            Originally posted by JackV View Post
            to be honest cliche

            you should look into the things you take time to write about it
            can you explain further what you exactly mean with "cliche"?i know the word but what´s your point?

            let´s be honest, sometimes any hip-hop track can be "too cliche" as you say.

            everday struggle, drugs, guns, fights, prison, knives, b***es,etc.

            what i did (or what i thought that i do ) was: mix battlerhymes with everyday life plus horrorcore plus lil bit political,etc.
            Love Peace & Harmony

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            • #7
              izzuuppiiiin
              Love Peace & Harmony

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              • #8
                I think it is mediocre.

                I cant get a good flow, and I don't see the message, even though it's a psycopath drug abuser. Have you listened to "necro"? ^^

                The rhymes are not the most innovative and catchy. like For me "steez" is when your cool and calm, not wild and killer.

                and "Who´s To Blame, For The Mess We Created?" for me doesn't fit with the rest of the text.

                I liked your style in drop 2 ^^ maybe it fits u better, u really feel like this towards society etc? Texts becomes best if u can relate to it yourself I guess.
                "Yo Krazy B". "You know what, When u said that last time, I was kind of trippin right, but now yo right, I am crazy, but you know waht else, I don't give a fuck" (Above the rim)
                "A coward dies a thousand deaths, A soldiers dies but once." (Tupac)
                "I am the punishment of god. If you had not comitted great sins, God would not have sent a punishment like me upon you." (Ghengis Khan)

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