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    Devil In Disguise (to Alcohol)


    U Unleashed A Deadly Dose Of Sickness
    On My Part.
    U Caused Violent Outbreaks
    & Broke So Many Hearts.

    U Defeated My Only Hero
    Who U Took Away Too Soon.
    He Fell Under Your Attractive Spell
    & Was Slowly Consumed By Your Doom.

    Though U Might Seem Appealing
    The Devil Within U Is Always The Same.
    U Just Bring It Out In The Best Of Us
    & Lead Us On Into Disray.

  • #2
    a very nice piece
    but there is not enuff evil

    and use of vocabulary is simple
    always remember when u wanna talk about sumthin deep u shud use deep vocab

    but its a good piece

    props

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    • #3
      I thought it was a good choice of vocab bro, i liked its simplicity but strength in message like you get what she's saying without losing intrest casue its real you know

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