Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

Conceptual Misunderstanding

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • Conceptual Misunderstanding

    The beauty of the beast
    His heart will never be deceased
    Though ever in war and peace
    His heart shall shine till his demise
    He awaits the home coming people
    Who shall spit on his image
    And talk to ask when problems fly by
    his mind as a flower will shine high
    Now people try to act tough
    But now people only blow trees off
    Where people serve no mind
    needing a place with same mintality
    But who cares to understand me ?

  • #2
    this is a gud piece, short yet says it all, made a good read, waiting to read more

    Comment


    • #3
      thx
      i wanted to know what did u feel when ya read it and what did u interpret

      Comment


      • #4
        good work man keep it up

        EDIT: i would tell u its a great choice of words and the poem is good but what i feel is sumthin different as m in a mindstate that nothin really affect me... BUT it was a great poem.. and keep it up

        Comment


        • #5
          thx mate

          Comment


          • #6
            Nice piece as always. A lil harder to interpret than your previous pieces. Sounds to me like a Battle Cry.

            Comment

            Who has read this thread:
            Working...
            X